Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Chloe ... descriptions

In addition to having mould on it's furry wing, the duck still swam through the rapids, over the lily pads and into the boring maths class.

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Posted by Anonymous at 11:26 AM

1 comment:

  1. AnonymousApril 6, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    I love this sentence! I think that your sentence of three is fantastic because it is an action sentence!

    From Heidi x

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