Thursday, May 5, 2011

Sentence Alisha

Daredevil Darcey, who has light brown hair, hazel green eyes and a big
cheeky grin, was about to leap off a rocky cliff consequently people
were cheering her on.


Sent from my iPod

Posted by Anonymous at 11:11 AM

6 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 6, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    Good use of consequently and I think it's just like Darcey.
    Nicole

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  2. Miss G NorrisMay 6, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    I love your adverbs grace

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  3. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 9:24 AM

    I like the extra information inside the commas.
    Mr Bagge

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  4. AnonymousMay 9, 2011 at 7:14 PM

    you have used consequently really well!

    Amy

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  5. AnonymousMay 9, 2011 at 7:40 PM

    well done Alisha good use of alitaration at the start of the sentacence from olivia

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  6. AnonymousJune 13, 2011 at 6:24 PM

    Wow! Alliteration, a sentence of three and a super connective in one sentence is fantastic! Well done Alisha!


    Heidi

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